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Postby Alpha_7 on Fri Oct 13, 2006 12:03 pm

Sorry all if I've been a bit quiet of late, I've had a lot on my plate both at work and at home. Well I guess a wake isn't your normal place to be taking photos, but I was asked to take some shots after the ceremony, and I'm only just now sorting through them. I wouldn't normally frame a shot like this, but it just happened and I kind of like it. Let me know what you think.

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Postby zafra52 on Sat Oct 14, 2006 6:15 pm

I don't see why you would not normally frame a picture like the one here. I would be very proud taking similar quality pictures. It is a happy and natural photograph, lovely smile, sharp, nice colours, and a good composition. Before you frame it, check the eyes because I think I detected a small white mark that can be easily corrected.
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Postby Manta on Sat Oct 14, 2006 6:24 pm

Yeah Craig - I'd be happy with this. As Zafra said, it's happy and natural. What more would you want? The fact that was taken at a wake adds more poignancy to the warm smile shown here. Nice work.

I agree about the white spot Zafra pointed out, just above her left eye. Many won't notice it but, once you know it's there, it's gotta go! :D
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sat Oct 14, 2006 6:25 pm

Thanks Zaf, my wife actually has a little white mark there, but your right, a judical use of the clone tool or spot healing wouldn't go astray. Thanks for the feedback. She was actually falling down a step and so fell out of frame, hence my comment about the different composition.
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Postby Manta on Sat Oct 14, 2006 6:38 pm

No offence meant to your beautiful bride Craig! The white spot looked like an artifact of some kind. It can stay! :oops:

However, I can't condone your pushing her down the stairs just to come up with a different perspective! To get to the last Tim Tam, fair enough, but NOT just for a snazzy composition!

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Postby Yi-P on Sat Oct 14, 2006 9:13 pm

Those eyes are beautiful, nicely captured Craig :D
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Postby surenj on Tue Oct 24, 2006 7:50 pm

Very nicely done...dynamic composition... Maybe you could sharpen the eyes even more..
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