Sunset @ the lake

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Sunset @ the lake

Postby stubbsy on Sun Oct 15, 2006 9:23 pm

I've had a hectic weekend playing Hunter tour guide for Sheepie. Here's the only image I've processed so far. Despite being quite dark, I quite like this one. Click the pic for a larger version.

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Postby daniel_r on Sun Oct 15, 2006 9:28 pm

Faaark!

Stubbsy, this is simply one of the best landscapes I've seen from you.

Too dark? Looks fine here.
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Re: Sunset @ the lake

Postby johnd on Sun Oct 15, 2006 9:31 pm

stubbsy wrote:I quite like this one.


So do I Peter. A lovely serene shot. I like the subtle variations in the colours in the sky and the water and the way the jetty leads your eye into the image.

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Postby NJ on Sun Oct 15, 2006 9:57 pm

bloody awesome shot stubbsy!
so sharp, yet so smooth!
love the colours :)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Oct 15, 2006 10:11 pm

That is pretty damn good, sorry its bloody excellent. Shame about the super bright light reflection on the left.. but its a tiny tiny niggle.
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Postby antman on Sun Oct 15, 2006 10:16 pm

A beautiful image. Nice one, Peter.
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Postby sheepie on Sun Oct 15, 2006 10:16 pm

I've gotta say that this looked much better on your new monitor this morning Peter ;) My little laptop screen just doesn't do it justice!

Thanks again for a great weekend (as usual) - Looking forward to seeing some more from the shoot. Next time, make it a little cooler though will you? ;) 8)
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Postby phillipb on Sun Oct 15, 2006 10:18 pm

Stubbsy, Stubbsy, the horizon mate, look at the horizon.

Great shot though.
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Postby Kyle on Sun Oct 15, 2006 10:18 pm

Peter, thats so wonderful, i'd like to buy a biiiig print 8)

How much? :)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Oct 15, 2006 10:21 pm

Kate would like a big print too, (we don't even have any of my shots hanging on the wall) better get my act together... so Peter where was this spot ? and can I borrow the D2x ?
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Postby Ady on Sun Oct 15, 2006 10:23 pm

It's not too dark at all. It looks fantastic.
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Postby sirhc55 on Sun Oct 15, 2006 10:27 pm

I’ll add to D’s comment - farking brilliant Peter :)
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Postby Geoff on Sun Oct 15, 2006 10:31 pm

Ripper shot Peter!
FRAME IT - STAT!
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Postby rokkstar on Sun Oct 15, 2006 10:37 pm

Peter, this is pretty ordinary.....pretty EXTRA-ordinary.

One of the best shots I've seen from you Peter. Excellent. Now why didn't you take me there?
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Postby rflower on Sun Oct 15, 2006 11:06 pm

I agree.

This is a great photo.

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Postby big pix on Sun Oct 15, 2006 11:10 pm

phillipb wrote:Stubbsy, Stubbsy, the horizon mate, look at the horizon.

Great shot though.


....... peter now about the horizion on a very good pix.......... :oops:
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Postby Underload on Mon Oct 16, 2006 8:41 am

Wow - very well done mate :wink:
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Postby radar on Mon Oct 16, 2006 9:13 am

Well done Peter,

That is a great spot at Belmont. I've always wanted to get a shot from there at sunset, now I won't, don't know that I could improve on this :!: :!:

And I don't think it looks too dark.

When I saw Sheepie's shot of the kids on the jetty, I thought I recognised the location.

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Postby Manta on Mon Oct 16, 2006 9:39 am

Just two words:

AWE
SOME

Brilliant work Mr Stubbs.
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Postby Oscar on Mon Oct 16, 2006 9:49 am

Excellent work - as usual, Peter. Well done. Cheers, Mick :) :) :)
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Postby blacknstormy on Mon Oct 16, 2006 10:27 am

Superb Stubbs !!!!!
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Postby Alex on Mon Oct 16, 2006 11:05 am

Excellent landscape photo. Looks great to me.

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Postby radar on Mon Oct 16, 2006 11:23 am

Peter,

I keep coming back to this photo, love it.

A few questions

-did you have to de-fish it much?
-interested to know why you used shutter priority as opposed to aperture or manual, just curious

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Postby sheepie on Mon Oct 16, 2006 11:29 am

radar wrote:interested to know why you used shutter priority as opposed to aperture or manual, just curious

I know he was practising his counting skills while taking shots - can only assume this meant he was using BULB with his remote ;) Whether that's the case with this shot I guess only Peter can confirm :)
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Oct 16, 2006 12:17 pm

Firstly thank you all for your comments.

Yes the horizon is crooked (I did fix it, but managed to post one I had not fixed). I'll fix that tonight.

As for selling prints. My honest view is the image is not good enough to print bigger than A3. When I look at it at about 200% I can see a lot of colour pixel noise in the water (a purple pixel here, a pale blue one there) which I fear may make a large version look bad. That said I've printed it at A3 and it looks fine.

André wrote:did you have to de-fish it much?
-interested to know why you used shutter priority as opposed to aperture or manual, just curious

You are correct that the image was taken with the 10.5 DX fisheye, but this image has had NO defish as it didn't need one. All I did was crop the bottom a little to remove the noticably curved shoreline and crop the top top to make a more pano style shape which I felt suited the image. If you have the horizon going through the centre of the fisheye lens it remains straight.

The shot was taken in shutter priority mode and is a 30 second exposure at F8, ISO 200. The image was taken at 6:49 PM so it was pretty dark by that stage. I used shutter priority because I wanted a long exposure to get the light and that's the easiest way to control that. Manual scares me :oops:
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Postby Yi-P on Mon Oct 16, 2006 12:25 pm

Im speechless, cant say more to what have been said above...


Can I borrow a D2x?? 8)
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Postby admajic on Mon Oct 16, 2006 12:41 pm

Good one Peter! I think the line of the jetty really helps in the picture. Brings u into the photo.
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Postby Jenno on Mon Oct 16, 2006 1:52 pm

Makes choosing the POW easy!! :D

Great image Peter
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Postby Lukaszek on Mon Oct 16, 2006 2:00 pm

This is simply amazing photo!!!

I agree with Jenno ... easy choice for POW!
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Postby Aussie Dave on Mon Oct 16, 2006 2:00 pm

stubbsy wrote:Manual scares me :oops:


Come on Stubbsy...the water's only cold when you first jump in :wink:

Great image by the way :)
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Postby BBJ on Mon Oct 16, 2006 6:16 pm

Very Very nice picture this Peter, i gues sif the rest are like this mate i would be very happy. Well done and look forward to seeing some more mate.
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Postby robw25 on Mon Oct 16, 2006 6:50 pm

daniel_r wrote:Faaark!


i couldn't have said it better !!!! it slapped me in the face .. wonderfull stubbsy

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Postby christiand on Mon Oct 16, 2006 7:41 pm

Aussergewoehnlich - extraordinary !

It is very very very v,v,v,v very nice.
It is so smooth, it is sliding off my monitor :lol:
Straighten it, please.

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Postby marcotrov on Mon Oct 16, 2006 9:55 pm

Peter a spectacular shot resulting from a clear vision and some excellent PP'ing that has raised the image to another level.
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Postby stubbsy on Wed Oct 18, 2006 2:32 pm

Thanks you all for your comments.

I was pretty lucky with this (and the other shots from that outing) because mother nature provided the hot day and cloudless sky that contributed to the great sunset colours captured here.
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Postby christiand on Wed Oct 18, 2006 7:57 pm

Hi Peter,

I had another close look on a high-res monitor (1650 x 1200).
Really lovely shot.
I was wondering if the photo would benefit from subduing the three reflections in the water on the left hand side and also straightening the horizon.

Thanks for sharing,
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Postby surenj on Wed Oct 18, 2006 8:00 pm

very very nice.... Should be printed framed and maybe sold!
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Postby mic on Wed Oct 18, 2006 10:58 pm

Bloody great shot Stubbsy.

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