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Hi 7,
The images are a bit small on your post, dont know if you can use medium size ones? I think a speedlight would have added lots of light, particularly to the likes of #4. Also, shouldnt you be working right now? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Oz
Umm, I work for me, and you work for .... ? oh yeah... p.s. I am what we call in the industry, an appreciator of a clear pic, but seriously, can you post them a little larger, because to click to original goes to full files size, which is too big for the little network I have here... ![]()
Hey 7 I'm afraid the images don't do too much for me, lighting and composition issues... (apart from HELLO #4
![]() ![]() #1 no real sense of what is going on here, the angle of the shot? #2 without the red thing, this could be a good shot, however the guy is still cut off at the waist and full length may be a better perspective #3 is very soft - camera + subject movement? #4 as noted above - Hello!!! but the feet are cut-off, which loses any dynamic from the photo from the dancing. J D3 | 18-200VR | 50:1.4 | 28:2.8 | 35-70 2.8 | 12-24 f4
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Hi 7
Perhaps a 12-24 would be perfect for this, and get an SB800 to go with it... Agree with Justin on #4 subject, please PM me her #... ![]() ![]()
thanks for the feedback,
i was using an 85mm fixed lens, so i had to shoot with what i had the more i look at number 1 the more i like it, the composition of the shot is interesting with the blue light being cast on the two guys while the one with a more dynamic pose and as for HELLO!!!! i am sure she would appreciate you all identifying her as that, she is actually really nice, here is another snap i took, this was outside the dance floor so it's a lot sharper ![]()
Get Oz in a dress, take some full length portraits, good practice... you get the idea!
![]() ![]() ![]() D3 | 18-200VR | 50:1.4 | 28:2.8 | 35-70 2.8 | 12-24 f4
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Amusing as we would all find that, the last thing i would want to be taking photos of is Oz in drag.
![]() 7 so moving along, so far i have played with apature priority and speed priority, i assume that if i increased the ISO i would have been able to get a sharper image of the motion pictures. as i understand it ISO is like the film speed for a regular camera. is that correct?
re your last photo, my only comments are:
1. You need to learn how to crop your photos properly ![]() 2. Try to take the shot as full length portraits instead of landscape. My $0.02 ![]() D70s/D200; Tokina 16-50mm 2.8; 18-70DX ; 50mm 1.8 ; 80-200mm 2.8D ; SB600 + Stofen Omini Bouncer
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