Take me home, Please!

Got a thin skin? Then look elsewhere. Post a link to an image that you've made, and invite others to offer their critiques. Honesty is encouraged, but please be positive in your constructive criticism. Flaming and just plain nastiness will not be tolerated. Please note that this is not an area for you to showcase your images, nor is this a place for you to show-off where you have been. This is an area for you to post images so that you may share with us a technique that you have mastered, or are trying to master. Typically, no more than about four images should be posted in any one post or thread, and the maximum size of any side of any image should not exceed 950 px.

Moderators: Greg B, Nnnnsic, Geoff, Glen, gstark, Moderators

Forum rules
Please note that image critiquing is a matter of give and take: if you post images for critique, and you then expect to receive criticism, then it is also reasonable, fair and appropriate that, in return, you post your critique of the images of other members here as a matter of courtesy. So please do offer your critique of the images of others; your opinion is important, and will help everyone here enjoy their visit to far greater extent.

Also please note that, unless you state something to the contrary, other members might attempt to repost your image with their own post processing applied. We see this as an acceptable form of critique, but should you prefer that others not modify your work, this is perfectly ok, and you should state this, either within your post, or within your signature.

Images posted here should conform with the general forum guidelines. Image sizes should not exceed 950 pixels along the largest side (height or width) and typically no more than four images per post or thread.

Please also ensure that you have a meaningful location included in your profile. Please refer to the FAQ for details of what "meaningful" is.

Take me home, Please!

Postby MHD on Thu Oct 19, 2006 8:54 pm

Taken at the Canberra RSCPA open day
Image
CC welcome as always..
New page
http://www.potofgrass.com
Portfolio...
http://images.potofgrass.com
Comments and money always welcome
User avatar
MHD
Moderator
 
Posts: 5829
Joined: Sat Sep 11, 2004 8:51 pm
Location: Chicago Burbs

Postby bwhinnen on Thu Oct 19, 2006 9:40 pm

Great subject, great use of black and white.

The only thing that takes away the effect of the photo on me is the amount of light on the floor, it pulls my attention away from those sad sad eyes.

The expression on the dogs face is truly amazing, as is the resting of its chin on the cage. I am surprised you haven't posted up photos of your newly aquired dog.
User avatar
bwhinnen
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1234
Joined: Fri Nov 26, 2004 11:12 am
Location: Cornubia, Brisbane

Postby mark on Thu Oct 19, 2006 10:07 pm

Nice shot. Those eyes say it all.
My last dog was from an animal haven and he was just the most grateful dog all his life.
User avatar
mark
Member
 
Posts: 410
Joined: Thu Apr 13, 2006 3:56 am
Location: Byron Bay | Northern NSW

Postby Geoff on Thu Oct 19, 2006 10:11 pm

Fantastic B&W conversion Scott, but it makes me sad to look at it.
Geoff
Special Moments Photography
Nikon D700, 50mm 1.4, 85mm 1.4, 70-200 2.8VR, SB800 & some simple studio stuff.
User avatar
Geoff
Moderator
 
Posts: 7791
Joined: Sat Aug 07, 2004 12:08 am
Location: Freshwater - Northern Beaches, Sydney.

Postby ozczecho on Fri Oct 20, 2006 12:36 am

Scott, thats a great shot...they eyes convey so much..your b&w conv. is exceptional...
User avatar
ozczecho
Senior Member
 
Posts: 785
Joined: Sun Mar 13, 2005 9:41 pm
Location: Beecroft, Sydney

Postby fishafotos on Fri Oct 20, 2006 2:34 am

normally I am not an animal-shot person but I must say, that is a great shot. It is not trying to be cute like most animal shots. That is what I like about it. It is very solemn and dignified. Great use of B&W and the strong shadows of the bars really look great. Good work.
User avatar
fishafotos
Member
 
Posts: 271
Joined: Mon Oct 16, 2006 12:48 am
Location: East Fremantle, W.A - D80

Postby Ladybird on Fri Oct 20, 2006 8:55 am

I like the emotion this conveys as well. It's a sad reminder of all the unwanted pets there are in Australian and the world.

If I had to critique this, I would have to agree with Bwhinnen and say the light on the floor detracts from the eyes. Maybe cropping some of that out would help? JMHO.
User avatar
Ladybird
Member
 
Posts: 175
Joined: Sat Sep 23, 2006 6:01 pm
Location: Brisbane, Queensland

Postby MHD on Fri Oct 20, 2006 10:25 am

Thanks for the comment guys...
This was taken telephoto and not set up so the bright spot in an unfortunate consequence of the natural setting... I will try a crop and see what I get...

Not mine unfortunately, We live in a unit so having a pet would be rather difficult... that's not to say I was not tempted...

This image ONLY works in BW, the colour version was somewhat lifeless, it was only on playing with BW conversion through specific channels did I get the contrast I needed... Then a artificial vignetting was applied to get rid of some distracting detail on ther perifery...
New page
http://www.potofgrass.com
Portfolio...
http://images.potofgrass.com
Comments and money always welcome
User avatar
MHD
Moderator
 
Posts: 5829
Joined: Sat Sep 11, 2004 8:51 pm
Location: Chicago Burbs


Return to Image Reviews and Critiques