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by Yi-P on Fri Nov 03, 2006 9:21 am
Was inspired by many cool photographs taken using a 'light paining' technique. So I grabbed my minimaglite and had a go yesterday night, here are the results:
Subjects and background are not really interesting, just having a try at this new technique learned. I adjusted the focus on the maglite so I can shine in some of the key parts of the lights I want and then open up wide and fill up the 'ambient' lights.
Settings: 50mm, 30"@f/16
C&C welcomed.
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by the foto fanatic on Fri Nov 03, 2006 10:21 am
Probably not the best subject to show off the technique. These pix don't look too much different from a normal flash exposure IMO.
I'd try the light a little more narrowly focussed on the subject, and perhaps a little less exposure to give it a better look.
Practicing is fun, though - right? 
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by Steffen on Sat Nov 04, 2006 12:09 am
Yi-P, you've got it all backwards. You have to mount the lens on the camera for those shots...
Seriously though, I think the big visible shadows destroy the lighting. With light painting, there isn't supposed to be a shadow. From what I've tried, and even more from what I've seen, I think this works best against a non-existant or far away backdrop. You just want to light up your subject, not make it cast a shadow.
Very nice lenses, though...
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by obzelite on Sat Nov 04, 2006 2:33 am
have to agree, not really the subject for it.
set your camera up on the back porch at f22 or something and go paint the garden.
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by adam on Sat Nov 04, 2006 4:45 am
I like the textures though
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by sheepie on Sat Nov 04, 2006 8:04 am
I do like the way the second lens seems to pop out of the picture. But these aren't the best subjects - give it a go on something a little more challenging (outside). Look forward to seeing your results. It's something I've never tried before, and will be interesting to see your progress over time 
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by adam on Sat Nov 04, 2006 2:23 pm
They look very computer-generated  heehee
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by Yi-P on Sun Nov 05, 2006 1:07 pm
Thanks for all the comment + suggestions...
Will try sometime later when I have time with some other subjects and a better try on the lighting... but I dont have a back porch nor garden to paint with... 
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