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Test shoot

Postby gooseberry on Mon Nov 13, 2006 4:55 pm

Took part in a test shoot for a model's comp card - this is just one of the shots. Welcome any comments. Do you think it works ?

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Postby Pehpsi on Mon Nov 13, 2006 6:18 pm

i dont have any experience with people shots, but this looks pretty sweet to me :) clarity and lighting all look spot on! so i think you did great.
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Postby Nnnnsic on Mon Nov 13, 2006 6:51 pm

Nice shot, but the cropping kills it for me.
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Postby gooseberry on Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:23 am

Pehpsi wrote:i dont have any experience with people shots, but this looks pretty sweet to me :) clarity and lighting all look spot on! so i think you did great.


Thanks Pehpsi, was playing around with the lights and was quite pleased with the results.
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Postby gooseberry on Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:24 am

Nnnnsic wrote:Nice shot, but the cropping kills it for me.


Thanks Leigh... you prefer a wider crop ?
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Postby Glen on Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:24 am

I very much like the lighting on her face
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Postby gooseberry on Tue Nov 14, 2006 3:44 pm

Glen wrote:I very much like the lighting on her face


Thanks Glen, still working on achieving different results with lighting.
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