Another Lightening shot

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Another Lightening shot

Postby agriffiths on Mon Nov 20, 2006 11:59 am

I was out on the balcony the other night watching a beautiful light show make it's way across the city and managed to capture this just before the rain hit. :)

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I had to make two seperate exposures due to blown highlights caused by the bright lights on the old exhibition buildings. It's my first go at something like this but I think it worked out ok.

Any comments / advice would be greatly appreciated :).
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Postby casnell on Mon Nov 20, 2006 12:02 pm

Wow ! That's fabulous ! Well done.

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Postby JordanP on Mon Nov 20, 2006 12:57 pm

A fine shot - even in the absence of the lightning. I particularly like the way the foreground interacts with the lightning. A clear high point in the general direction of where the lightning is headed. Colours are also unique in this image and at a guess it has benefited from your double exposure.

Nicely captured.
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Nov 20, 2006 2:22 pm

It's my first go at something like this but I think it worked out ok.


Far too modest. :wink: This is a brilliant image. As Craig has already said, even without the lightning this is a cracker shot. The lightning is the icing on the cake. I can't wait to see your next go at this. You've set yourself a high standard.

Thanks for sharing this.
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Postby Glen on Mon Nov 20, 2006 2:24 pm

Agree 100% with Stubbsy, brilliant
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Postby Killakoala on Mon Nov 20, 2006 6:56 pm

I agree with those above and before me. It's a brilliant shot. I think that the style of the building and gardens really adds to the image. It would have less impact if it was a modern concrete building.

Great work.
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Postby Oscar on Mon Nov 20, 2006 7:01 pm

Great capture. Well done. Cheers, Mick :) :) :)
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Postby ozimax on Mon Nov 20, 2006 7:45 pm

Agree with Stubbsy, Glen and all others who have commented and will comment - spectacular!
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Postby MHD on Mon Nov 20, 2006 7:54 pm

Green with envy mate!
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Postby radar on Mon Nov 20, 2006 8:11 pm

Magic!

that's the kind of lightning shot I like. The lightning is not the only part of the photo, it complements it.

Well done,

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Postby Sheila Smart on Mon Nov 20, 2006 8:32 pm

Excellent work. Right time, right place.
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Postby marcotrov on Mon Nov 20, 2006 9:27 pm

Fantastic Image. Great timing, composition and tonality.
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Postby BBJ on Mon Nov 20, 2006 9:39 pm

This is a bloody great shot love it and waht a backdrop, un bloody real.
i would have that printed at 20x30 inches and framed and on my wall for sure.
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Postby Pehpsi on Mon Nov 20, 2006 10:21 pm

awesome shot there. top notch.

love to know how you go about shots like this?
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Postby Willy wombat on Mon Nov 20, 2006 11:03 pm

The lighting under the trees in the park make this a cracker shot. Great exposure, and the lightning makes is remarkable.
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Postby agriffiths on Tue Nov 21, 2006 12:03 pm

Wow, thanks for the kind comments everyone :D . It's been a while since I've posted here and it's great to be back!

Mixing the two exposures was a lot of fun. I think I've got the bug now!
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Postby Trieu on Tue Nov 21, 2006 3:00 pm

Great timing!!!!

I wish I could do that....
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Postby mark on Tue Nov 21, 2006 3:06 pm

Awesome shot. :D
Well done, you have got to be happy with that one. As BBJ says, print it big and hang it on your wall.
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Postby agriffiths on Wed Nov 22, 2006 5:33 pm

awesome shot there. top notch.

love to know how you go about shots like this?


Thanks Pehpsi,

Actually after seeing your website I'm surprised you need to ask. Your gallery is full of brilliant shots that put mine to shame.

To cut a long story short I stood on the balcony with a giant metal rod and held it in the air when I wanted to take a shot... quick tip, the longer the metal rod the better the lightening shot ;).

Actually this shot is basically made up of two RAW exposures (well three actually - 3rd used for expanding dynamic range in the sky) which have been masked in photoshop and blended into a single shot. I put a fair bit of PP work into it since it's the first time I've tried one of these and I'm sure there's probably a much faster way of doing it.

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Postby mic on Thu Nov 23, 2006 9:12 pm

Is the building a bit off being straight ? or is it me.

Otherwise what a CRACKER !

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Postby agriffiths on Fri Nov 24, 2006 10:30 am

Thanks Mic,
Jeez you got a good eye! I went back and checked it with the crop tool. It looks like there's a slight tilt of between 0.5 to 1 degree off vertical. Not sure if it's worth fixing. I might have another go this afternoon.
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