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Melbourne workshop - Kylie and Jordyn

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Melbourne workshop - Kylie and Jordyn

Postby Alex on Tue Nov 21, 2006 10:33 pm

A few more from the Melbourne workshop.


Cheeky Jordyn

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Kylie in high key practice shot - not sure if it worked.

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Not too pleased with the hotspot on the forehead here and background light fall-off.

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More can be found here:

http://agitlits.m6.net/NikonD70/Kylie_Jordyn.asp

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Alex
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Postby casnell on Tue Nov 21, 2006 11:10 pm

I like #2, really works for me, but I love 4028big on your website .

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Postby Oz_Beachside on Wed Nov 22, 2006 9:36 am

agree with Chris, 4028 is a great one... here it is, if I may...

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Postby Alex on Wed Nov 22, 2006 9:43 am

Thanks Chris and Bruce. I like 4028 - the only problem I have with it is the lights are a bit hot on the right hand side of Kylie's nose.

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