Night out in the city

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Night out in the city

Postby PiroStitch on Sun Dec 03, 2006 11:24 am

Some photos from Saturday night while waiting in the city.

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Postby wendellt on Sun Dec 03, 2006 12:01 pm

like the urban subject matter

but it lacks atmospherics

im comparing this work to your previous moody urban light jam you did a couple of months ago
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Postby PiroStitch on Sun Dec 03, 2006 9:04 pm

fair call Wendell :) Like I mentioned the other day, I feel like i took better photos with my old camera than with the new one...still learning and struggling :D
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Postby Poon on Tue Dec 05, 2006 4:29 am

Very nice shots.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Dec 05, 2006 9:38 am

I tend to agree with Wendell, I've come back a few times before commenting but your earlier Urban work (Jam has wendell would put it) is much better IMO then these ones, they lack impact or atmosphere that was very apparent in the earlier work.
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Postby seeto.centric on Wed Dec 06, 2006 3:41 pm

the moon behind the clouds in the first shot is nice, but there;s a bit of jitter in the 3rd pic, right?

will look at your other shots (once i find them!)

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