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Last week lightning @ Adelaide( 5 Photos)

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Last week lightning @ Adelaide( 5 Photos)

Postby tyrone_tong on Thu Jan 04, 2007 6:34 pm

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#5 Lightning @ Tea Tree Plaza.
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Postby Marvin on Thu Jan 04, 2007 9:47 pm

The second one looks great Tyrone. You have got some good captures. I would slightly straighten the horizon in the last one. Were you up at Windy Point?
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Postby shaunc on Fri Jan 05, 2007 12:46 am

Thes are fantastic Tyrone.
#2 would look great just cropped in on the lighning.

Were these taken from around the RAA building?
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Postby Big V on Fri Jan 05, 2007 2:32 am

Tyrone, the last one look as if the bolt is going into the tower at tea tree plaza - I like it. Second one has nice colour to it. Well done.
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Postby nat on Fri Jan 05, 2007 9:44 am

Nicely done Tyrone!
I quite like the second one too and agree with shaunc - a tighter crop could look quite spectacular. Give it a go and see what you come up with, then please post it for us all to enjoy!!
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Postby xerubus on Fri Jan 05, 2007 9:51 am

great series....

seeing tea tree plaza makes me homesick :( I'm originally from Athelstone which isn't too far from there.

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Postby CraigVTR on Fri Jan 05, 2007 2:13 pm

Tyrone
Great series. I agree with the tighter crop on #2 and leveling the horizon on the last.
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Postby tyrone_tong on Fri Jan 05, 2007 3:36 pm

Thanks for the comments.
I will try to crop the second one. :roll:
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