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Posted: **Sun Jan 14, 2007 5:51 pm**

These are a couple from the shoot I did in a park yesterday.

More here http://agitlits.m6.net/nikond70/KhunYing.asp

Any critique and comments would be very appreciated.

Thanks

Alex

Posted: **Sun Jan 14, 2007 6:57 pm**

I think your pictures would be more engaging if you had some eye contact with your subject. I know you posted some with eye contact earlier and I felt they were better.

Posted: **Sun Jan 14, 2007 7:40 pm**

Thanks, Kris. Yes, I tried it both ways. I think I prefer more eye contact too.

Alex

Posted: **Mon Jan 15, 2007 9:57 am**

nice shots.

Were you using the on camera flash or did you have an external one?

Posted: **Mon Jan 15, 2007 1:52 pm**

Hey Garlino,

I was using sb800 off-camera (SC-29) with LSPJ II attachment.

Cheers
Alex

Posted: **Mon Jan 15, 2007 7:20 pm**

Ahhh thanks alex,

Thought it was something like that as the skin tones are nice

Posted: **Mon Jan 15, 2007 7:27 pm**

Exposure is spot on and model is good, but the frame and around is too busy and makes up distraction from the eye as not being keeping on the model but goes on looking for the details around her IMHO

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Park shoot

Park shoot