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Craig

PostPosted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 1:17 am
by Geoff
Playing with a few SB800's, the use of Paul's brolly, stand and flash adapter...result # 1 - many more to come. Comments, good bad and ugly welcomed:

Image

PostPosted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 1:59 am
by Alpha_7
Pity my eyes are so bloodshot, but you could fix that in post.. um I like the funky shadow from my arm on the wall.. I'm sure not everyone will but I like the affect..

How did the snoot ones come out ?

PostPosted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 10:07 am
by fishafotos
Comments, good bad and ugly welcomed:



I'm going with ugly :P
I think a little more contrast and shadow, maybe do it in B&W, it just seems to be lacking punch.

PostPosted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 3:04 pm
by Onyx
Took me a while to realise that was Craig's arm in the background. For some reason, the perspective gave it a longer focal length look...
I prefer #2 (in the other thread), the composition doesn't look right IMO - needs to be shifted a little left, towards more of Craig's back.

PostPosted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 3:57 pm
by Matt. K
Goeff
It's a good pose but technically it doesn't 'pop'. I too like the background treatment. The shadows around the eyes? Is that an effect you were after?

PostPosted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 4:04 pm
by Alpha_7
Matt. K wrote:The shadows around the eyes?


Narh Matt that's just me, and my lack of sleep.