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boats

PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 9:05 pm
by zeddy
well i had to photograph a boat for my course so here what i think are best comments welome

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i found getting nice photo was not as easy as i thought

zsolt

PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 10:27 pm
by phillipb
Hi Zsolt, my pick from these would be no.2.
I think it could be improved if you cropped closer because the background is a bit bland, straighten up the horizon and maybe a touch more contrast.

PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 10:37 pm
by phillipb
I was thinking something like this.

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 10:33 pm
by zeddy
cheers Phillip looks better.i really need to spend more time in PP

zsolt

PostPosted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 10:48 pm
by Glen
Zsolt, the two lasers are my pick too. The background is a little busy on 1 & 3.

PostPosted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 11:21 pm
by rflower
I don't mind the first one. It's a nice reflection.

In regards to #3 ... IMHO, if you are taking a picture of a yacht, you should have the whole mast in the photo. My eyes follow the lines of the sail rope, but it just stops before the top. I also think there is too much water in the foreground

... just my 2c worth.


Russell

PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 9:08 am
by Yi-P
Will you be possible to revisit during twilight times? It would be much better on #1 and #2 if was taken during sunset/rise hours. :wink:

PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 11:28 am
by Mj
Zsolt... also do a similar cropping for #4 as the background etc lends very little to the shot... then play with the levels a little to give it an overall boost.

PostPosted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 9:38 pm
by zeddy
thanks for the comments ,i think i will retry this at a later date and keep all your comments in mind
thanks zsolt