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Postby viper1968 on Tue Feb 27, 2007 9:58 pm

Hey everyone,
My name is Andrew, I'm new to the dslr forum and though I would post a photo of mine and see what others though. I'm very interested in getting people's opinions and any pointers that will help me with my photography.

I'm currently shooting with a canon 5d.

I look forward to your comments and hopefully meeting some of you in the future.
Cheers Andrew

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Postby Tim on Tue Feb 27, 2007 10:04 pm

Hi Andrew, welcome :)

Have you got a larger version?
From what Ive read on here, 800 pixels down either side is a great photo size.
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Postby bwhinnen on Tue Feb 27, 2007 10:05 pm

Hi Andrew,

Welcome. I like the photo from what I can see, do you have a link to a larger version, this size just doesn't do it justice.

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Postby Hudo on Tue Feb 27, 2007 10:12 pm

We seek forgiveness for Andrew as he's a Canon shooter :-) Andrew works in the Sydney office of the company I work for and he's not a bad bloke, despite the Canon thing..lol.. Welcome Andrew !
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Tue Feb 27, 2007 10:14 pm

And the photo changed....the first one looked better. I am at Malabar....welcome...nice work!

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Postby viper1968 on Tue Feb 27, 2007 10:18 pm

Thanks everyone.... How do I make the photo bigger? (I'm such a novice)
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Postby bwhinnen on Tue Feb 27, 2007 10:22 pm

I agree the first was a much better image :)
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Postby viper1968 on Tue Feb 27, 2007 10:30 pm

Sorry everyone...... hopefully this is better... and its the first photo again....
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Postby oli on Tue Feb 27, 2007 10:36 pm

Great exposure, the colours are very nice. Composition is also good I think. Look forward to seeing more of your photos.
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Postby big pix on Tue Feb 27, 2007 10:44 pm

nice image ...... but the pink puts me off a bit or is that the lighting at the pool.......
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Postby viper1968 on Tue Feb 27, 2007 10:47 pm

The pink lighting was was from the street light in the park
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Postby big pix on Tue Feb 27, 2007 10:49 pm

viper1968 wrote:The pink lighting was was from the street light in the park


but was it pink........ it can be corrected in photoshop...... easy if you shot your image in RAW
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Postby viper1968 on Tue Feb 27, 2007 10:55 pm

It was a pinky orange colour..... I liked the contrasting colours of the pink and blue. Probably not everyone cup of tea though.
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Postby Tim on Tue Feb 27, 2007 11:01 pm

I like it... its very different :)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Feb 27, 2007 11:07 pm

Welcome to the forum Andrew, 5D very nice, what lenses do you have in your collection? I like the contrasting colours, and the image is so peaceful and relaxing, I like it a lot.
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Postby viper1968 on Tue Feb 27, 2007 11:20 pm

Lenses include: 24-70mm f2.8 L series, 70-200mm f2.8 IS L series, 85mm f1.2 L series, 50mm f1.8, Tamron 90mm f2.8.
580ex flash, and a 2x extension
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Feb 27, 2007 11:25 pm

Good collection of glass and accesories there. Just wondering if you find the 24 is wide enough on the FF 5D, or do you sometimes crave a WA to supplement your kit ?
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Postby viper1968 on Tue Feb 27, 2007 11:30 pm

No, Definately looking for a WA. Currently looking at either the 16-35mm or 17-40mm
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Postby hart on Tue Feb 27, 2007 11:41 pm

viper1968 wrote:No, Definately looking for a WA. Currently looking at either the 16-35mm or 17-40mm


The 17-40 is lovely on my 30D - it would be even better on a 5D.
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Postby colin_12 on Wed Feb 28, 2007 10:57 pm

I like the colours too Andrew.
Nice pic.
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