Some more
The rest from the shoot is here: http://www.alexgitlits.com
Thanks for critique and comments.
Alex
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Just finished editing the photos from the shoot with Nan.
Some more
The rest from the shoot is here: http://www.alexgitlits.com Thanks for critique and comments. Alex
2nd and last one are cool
2nd one in particular has nice complimenting tones although shoting up and getting that foreshortening may work for that sort of dramatic shot but for fashion images no distortion is preferred the background in the 3rd doesnt work quite as well as the other ones but i can see what you were trying to do
The second is good, Alex.
Once again, I'd boost those reds as she's looking a bit mannish here and I'd clean up the flash being bounced on her cheek in the last one. Just clone some skin in a different layer and decrease the opacity of the layer a bit, that way it'll be still there with some realism but less noticeable. I'd also pull out a bit more detail with feathering and curves from the top one on the right side as her hair almost complete blends with the black in the shadows of the alley. Producer & Editor @ GadgetGuy.com.au
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Number 1 for me - although i would bring some detail in the shadows out, her black jacket gets lost in the shadows - nice work!
Dan
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