C&C on these two please

Hi all,
Here are two different shots from today. I'm mainly looking on C&C on the PP as I realize that neither are exceptionally good photographs by themselves.
Be harsh, I'm young enough to recover from any damage caused by it.
Here are two different shots from today. I'm mainly looking on C&C on the PP as I realize that neither are exceptionally good photographs by themselves.


Be harsh, I'm young enough to recover from any damage caused by it.
