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Postby byrt_001 on Sat Apr 07, 2007 1:02 am

Hi Everyone

gosh i have not posted for a while...

last weekend i worked on the local motox, full of action and dusk. was great

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Postby lukeo on Sat Apr 07, 2007 3:44 am

My favorite would be the last, but they are all good shots. Well composed and technically well excuted in my opinion. The colours have come up nicely in them all. Thanks for sharing :)
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Postby Killakoala on Sat Apr 07, 2007 7:41 am

Those first two are great. The total action freeze in the first one is excellent.
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Postby gstark on Sat Apr 07, 2007 9:43 am

CHristian,

Great images.

I love the first two, but might suggest a bit of cropping, from the top, of the first one. Just tighten it up a bit: remove the sky, and see what you think.

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Postby byrt_001 on Sat Apr 07, 2007 5:19 pm

Hi
Thanks for your comments

gstark: yes..looks much better, gives more interest to the subject.

next weekend is the next race so I will print a few 6X8in and see if it sells?

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