To crop... Or not

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Crop... or not?

Don't Crop
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Crop
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Why bother. It's an ordinary image
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To crop... Or not

Postby stubbsy on Sun Apr 08, 2007 1:54 pm

This is a very problematic image for me and I've spent maybe 20 minutes playing with the cropping and now I'm all cropped out :wink:

I'd be interested in your comments and to make it easy I've even set up a vote.

The cropped version

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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Sun Apr 08, 2007 1:59 pm

Cropped for mine..i like the Pano aspect.....great shot BTW!

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Postby gstark on Sun Apr 08, 2007 2:19 pm

Peter,

I'd remove some of the sky as well.
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Postby bwhinnen on Sun Apr 08, 2007 2:30 pm

Peter, I agree with Gary, perhaps the top 1/3 to 1/2 of the clouds. Lovely shot though!

Such a luminous colour to the ocean!
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Postby marcotrov on Sun Apr 08, 2007 7:30 pm

I like the layering effect with the sky and beach being seperated by the turquoiseof the ocean. I think the crop works better but I don't feel that it is a very strong image Peter. I wonder if cloning out that small rock formation on the left hand edge would create less distraction for the viewing eye? IMHO I don't think it adds all that much to the sweeping lines in the image.
Certainly it doesn't impress me like your previous work and given that high standard this one would frankly not be one I'd see you spending too much time on.
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Postby PiroStitch on Sun Apr 08, 2007 7:36 pm

agree with cropping the sky a bit more. Also just to make it a bit more vibrant, add a gradient layer from black to transparent and set the blending mode to overlay (in p/shop). Should bring the clouds out a bit more.
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Postby Geoff on Sun Apr 08, 2007 7:44 pm

CROP IT!
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Postby Oz_Beachside on Sun Apr 08, 2007 10:44 pm

from those two, I prefer the foreground detail of the non crop. I have never seen a beach with such beautiful water, and black sand.

alternatively, 10% off the sky on the crop might change my mind...
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Postby Killakoala on Sun Apr 08, 2007 11:12 pm

Peter, just go with your gut instinct.
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Postby Matt. K on Sun Apr 08, 2007 11:56 pm

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Postby !~DeViNe~DaRkNeSs~! on Mon Apr 09, 2007 2:39 am

i like the cropped version, draws my eyes to strengthen the backgrounds detail & depth........

uncropped tends to make me focus too much on the foreground
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