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by iposiniditos on Fri Apr 13, 2007 10:24 am
Hello all,
i was a member of the little symphonic orchestra of my music school in the past, but now i'm just the audience of some of my students in this orchestra
The conductor has seen some of my photos and asked me to do a poster for the upcoming concert.
It's not the final as i don't know what i have to write exactly, but i think that i have decided this as the final design.
You will help a lot with your comments for the final result!
thanks a lot,
theodoros

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by Matt. K on Fri Apr 13, 2007 6:43 pm
I'm not sure I like the 2 kids in the poster. The one on the left seems depressed and brings the tone of the poster down. I'd like to see a lot more little cutouts, including some quavers and other musical notes....perhaps brightly coloured....and happy faces.
Regards
Matt. K
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by iposiniditos on Sat Apr 21, 2007 10:15 pm
Thanks a lot Matt for your answer. I think that you are right.
I'm sure that one face will work better. Your sugeestions are great.
I have to give a second try to this poster.
Thanks a lot again!
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by Oscar on Sun Apr 22, 2007 8:24 am
Theodorus, is the poster for a type of benefit concert?
I agree with the comments by Matt. Seems sad and depressing.
If the concert is a benefit performance by and for the kids then perhaps several happy smiling faces and some bright colours would be much more appealing to both the children and their family members.
Cheers, Mick 
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by devilla101 on Sun Apr 22, 2007 11:41 am
Put my design hat on
I agree with the above and I say delete the left pic.
My suggestions are:
Add colors. My suggestion would be a dark blue for the background.
Remove the underline and make the type bigger and bolder to make it stand out more Color it orange. Make the borders pink. If you need to use the clipart make them colorful as well. As for the pic on the left, use the color version.
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