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Postby myarhidia on Wed Apr 11, 2007 1:17 am

Don't know if you have seen the "seriously" campaign for the Ten network. Most the time they have the actors from their series in B&W, hard light on the left, cropped tight with plenty of white space (I think the technical term is negative space) on the RHS. I like the effect of these commercials, anyway, here is my take of it with my youngest.

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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Wed Apr 11, 2007 2:35 am

Nice HighKey image...cropping has me a little concerned but great shot none the less!
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Postby surenj on Thu Apr 12, 2007 4:13 am

nice photo. more detail in the left eye would be better. also this white space can be used to superimpose another photo of the child in a different pose + smaller and far away and perhaps full length ....just a thought...
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