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Flashing in the Garden

Postby pippin88 on Sun Apr 15, 2007 10:18 pm

Few from a play with off camera flash:

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Notes for next time: The camera's LCD ain't great at showing when you've got the angle wrong and the flash is directly spilling into the lens a little. Leads to washed out pics :roll:
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Apr 15, 2007 11:02 pm

I really like the first, and don't mind the 2nd either.

The third and fourther don't have much to offer me, they lack impact and a dominate focus for me.
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Postby pippin88 on Sun Apr 15, 2007 11:07 pm

Thanks Craig.

Did you view the larger versions (click for larger)? The thumbnails don't really show the in focus parts of 3 and 4.
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Postby aloysius on Sun Apr 15, 2007 11:09 pm

I love the 4th. DOF is spot on.
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Postby spaz on Sun Apr 15, 2007 11:13 pm

Really like the 4th too. I thought the DOF was just as I would have liked when I saw the thumbnail but in the larger version it seems a little shallow.
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Postby binky on Sun Apr 15, 2007 11:26 pm

The 2nd one does it for me.

Pippin88, Have a question though .. when I look at the larger images by clicking on the thumbnail .. ISO shows up as " 13107200"... a problem?
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Apr 16, 2007 12:38 am

pippin88 wrote:Thanks Craig.

Did you view the larger versions (click for larger)? The thumbnails don't really show the in focus parts of 3 and 4.


Guilty as charged, the forums been super slow for me so I hadn't checked the larger versions, I have now, and my preferences for the first and second hasn't changed.
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Postby pippin88 on Mon Apr 16, 2007 2:25 pm

Thanks for the comments.

Binky: I'm aware of that problem - appeared one time when I did a gallery update, but I can't really be bothered to try fix it.
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