Mick, it works

With the luxury of 20/20 hindsight now sitting in my house, I would suggest that instead of her being centre frame, I would have her slightly right in the frame, about 1/3 of the frame from the right and the surfer she was shooting about 1/3 from the left of the frame. That said, if I was walking down the beach and saw a good looking girl I would have just pressed the shutter and hoped for the best
