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Afternoon at Oran Park

Postby Jeff on Sun Apr 22, 2007 4:59 pm

Went to Oran Park yesterday for a quick visit and just a few from the action.

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Postby Kyle on Sun Apr 22, 2007 5:24 pm

Last is great Jeff, nice work :D
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Postby Raskill on Sun Apr 22, 2007 7:54 pm

Hi mate,

Nice to see you get out and relaxing for an afternoon, rather than working!

I prefer 1 and 2. Nice panning on one, with good wheel blur and sense of speed from the background. 2 is nice and sharp. Good exposure to get the drivers face, and good timing to get the front near side wheel off the ground! Nice colour and contrast in both these images also.

Three seems a bit soft, maybe a slightly to slow shutter speed or shallow DOF? The holden badge seems slightly OOF. That being said, you got a good amount of wheel blur and a sense of speed, which is difficult with head on shots.

Nice all round. Hopefully catch up soon. The new camera arrives tommorrow, so I'll have to give it a workout soon!

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Postby Jeff on Sun Apr 22, 2007 10:12 pm

Thanks guys,yes No3 is a bit soft but I tried to be arty like someone else and angle the camera to try something different.Let us know how good the new arrival is.

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