One ANZAC shot (Rememberence Wall - National War Memorial)

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One ANZAC shot (Rememberence Wall - National War Memorial)

Postby Willy wombat on Thu Apr 26, 2007 11:09 pm

A softer warm finish on this image seemed to be appropriate


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Postby stubbsy on Fri Apr 27, 2007 10:44 am

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I'm a bit ambivalent about this shot. I like it a lot compositionally but I think the warm is overdone in that it's unnaturally yellow. Oddly I have no problem with the exceptionally red poppies. I think this is a strong enough image to work with the need to push the colours this far.
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Postby bwhinnen on Fri Apr 27, 2007 11:03 am

I like the image compositionally, I too like the redness of the poppies, however I think this would be better as a selective colour B&W or more stark white instead of the warm tones.

The warmer tones give me a vibrant feeling rather than one of reflection and respect for those ANZAC's who lost their lives defending our great country.

Please note these are my feelings!
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Postby Willy wombat on Fri Apr 27, 2007 11:08 am

thansk guys for this good feedback - I will have a re-crack at it
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Postby Raskill on Fri Apr 27, 2007 9:59 pm

I like it, the yellow tone gives a warm feel to sad board.

I would have liked to get a nice cloe up of a name on the baord, with the rest vanishing into the DOF....

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Postby mic on Fri Apr 27, 2007 10:36 pm

Ww,

I looked at this image and saw something different.

Drop the light levels right down so the poppy's go Blood Red, the sunlight coming through the bars look like they are inprisoned

Great shot, but after a few beers and my imagination going a bit wild I saw it how it was

A lot of spilt blood & imprisonment

Sorry to bring down your warm image, but this is what I saw and what I believe happened to these poor souls.

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Postby Willy wombat on Mon May 07, 2007 11:33 pm

Took some of the comments on board guys (thanks for making the effort to let me know what you thought - I appreciate it) and had another go trying for a much moodier treatment, bringing out the red poppies and more contrast in the shadows.

Feel free to let me know what you think.

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Postby stubbsy on Tue May 08, 2007 12:01 am

Steve

I think the rework is decidedly better
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Postby Willy wombat on Tue May 08, 2007 12:18 am

Thanks Peter
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