Something to laugh about

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Something to laugh about

Postby kamran on Fri Apr 27, 2007 5:23 am

Hello everyone,

Shot this image of a family member and it turned out to be quite a natural pose in the end. Your comments please.

Following gear was used:
Nikon D200, Nikkor AF 50mm 1.8D

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Focal Length = 50 mm
Aperture = f/2.0
Shutter Speed = 1/1000 sec.
ISO Rating = 200
Last edited by kamran on Sat May 05, 2007 4:52 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Postby iGBH on Fri Apr 27, 2007 8:42 am

Love it. Excellent composition and the exposure is spot on.
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Postby binky on Fri Apr 27, 2007 10:24 am

Nice Image... keeps me wondering what he was laughing about.
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Postby kamran on Mon Apr 30, 2007 8:20 pm

I tried again, but I think the first one looks better. It has a bit more "character" to it.

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Focal Length = 50 mm
Aperture = f/2.2
Shutter Speed = 1/80 sec.
ISO Rating = 400
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Postby W00DY on Mon Apr 30, 2007 8:23 pm

Yeah I love the first one better... get timing.
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Postby Alex on Mon Apr 30, 2007 8:24 pm

Great work on No. 1.

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Postby iGBH on Mon Apr 30, 2007 8:57 pm

Yep, i think number 1 is better also. Good timing and a better composition than number 2.
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Postby Killakoala on Mon Apr 30, 2007 8:59 pm

The first image is brilliant. It looks so natural. Well done. Your post-processing on this image is also excellent.
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Postby ATJ on Mon Apr 30, 2007 10:02 pm

The first one is the pick for me. It looks relaxed and natural. The second one looks a bit staged.
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Postby methd on Mon Apr 30, 2007 11:06 pm

i actually prefer the second one.

laughing with a closer crop is more appealing to me
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Postby surenj on Tue May 01, 2007 12:44 am

great shots... hmm give me idea for triptych ;)
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