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B&W High Key Jaguar Hood Ornament
Posted:
Mon Apr 30, 2007 1:00 pmby Laurie
after the rain
i am a little disappointed that the jaguar's head is slightly out of focus, but I know i focused on it particularly. perhaps a wider f/stop would of helped.
Critique and Criticism Welcome!
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Posted:
Mon Apr 30, 2007 6:53 pmby BT*ist
I like it, but I think it needs more background behind the ornament than just white (and the black corner accentuates the blank space). If only the slightly grey paintwork extended behind the ornament.... Cool idea, though - the water droplets on the chrome metal look really good, too!
Posted:
Fri May 04, 2007 2:13 pmby Alpha_7
I'd like to see a little more detail in it, its just a fraction too high key for me. I prefer the rain detail in the bottom right to the lack of detail in the left.
Posted:
Fri May 04, 2007 3:53 pmby Laurie
2 crops I just did (from smugmug!)
let me know your thoughts please
Posted:
Fri May 04, 2007 3:57 pmby Alpha_7
I like the Pano Crop..
I could see this being used as stock for a Prestige car addvertisment (brochure), or something..
small pano, fine detail type filler
Posted:
Fri May 04, 2007 4:11 pmby methd
i'd like to see a crop without the front headlights of the car. i think the lack of it will lead the eyes to the jaguar better.
Posted:
Fri May 04, 2007 4:27 pmby Laurie
i think it looks good, except the OOF head
