Here's a shot I like, but can't quite explain why. Maybe it's because the bridge isn't in the view...
Brutal critique as always much appreciated!
Cheers
Steffen.
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With leg 2 of our Harbour walk just around the corner I've taken a closer look at the crop from leg 1.
Here's a shot I like, but can't quite explain why. Maybe it's because the bridge isn't in the view...
Brutal critique as always much appreciated! Cheers Steffen. lust for comfort suffocates the soul
Brutal Stubbsy here steffen. I think the image has potential but don't like the conversion which, for me, is a bit flat tonally.
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Thanks Peter, that's certainly something I can work on
Cheers Steffen. lust for comfort suffocates the soul
Looks kinda silvery to me, not very real for some reason. But the composition looks good, maybe it's just too many highlights in the tree?
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That's what I was after, a svelte, metallic look for the buildings in the background. I tried to imitate the feel of images I saw in a 1960's book about what cities in 2000 would be like 
Cheers Steffen. lust for comfort suffocates the soul
About the tree, it does seem to have a glow to it that I didn't notice in Aperture. I can't imagine the jpeg conversion would be to blame for that. Maybe t'was a little late last night... 
Cheers Steffen. lust for comfort suffocates the soul
I like the silver treatment but the halo on the palm tree is very disturbing.
Composition wise I like it the roof at in the forground for some reason reminds me of a boat, like Noah's ark or something.
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