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Postby aloysius on Thu May 03, 2007 9:20 pm

<a href="http://joeharrison.info/galleries/Sport/tryptich.jpg">Image</a>

What you guys think?[/url]
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Postby bwhinnen on Thu May 03, 2007 9:24 pm

Smaller image perhaps? Bit hard on a 1024x768 screen to view it as a whole though.

I was expecting to see him fall off in the third frame though :)

Nice 'little' series!
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Postby aloysius on Thu May 03, 2007 9:28 pm

yeah was doing that as you posted, i forgot that firefox auto sizes images...it looked fine on my screen before i posted the link :P
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Postby lukeo on Thu May 03, 2007 9:35 pm

Looks great at 1920x1200 :D I like the emotion you can see on the blokes face.
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Postby bwhinnen on Thu May 03, 2007 9:35 pm

;) That is easier to see.

After seeing it like this I wonder what it would look as a vertical triptych? Or event with the first as a larger image and the other two as smaller ones inside it...

Just thinking aloud.
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Postby khalil on Thu May 03, 2007 10:16 pm

love the series.but is just me or is the water colour different in each photo or was this done o purpose?
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Postby aloysius on Fri May 04, 2007 8:40 am

khalil wrote:love the series.but is just me or is the water colour different in each photo or was this done o purpose?


:( yeah it is. I just am not competent enough at PP to get the levels right. that is as close as i could get them they original shot was much worse.
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Postby aloysius on Fri May 04, 2007 8:43 am

lukeo wrote:Looks great at 1920x1200 :D I like the emotion you can see on the blokes face.


Thats what made me pick these shots...he is so damn happy about catching a wave. I have heaps of shots from the day but all of them have concentrating faces on...these ones stood out with him looking so happy :)
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