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Hill Tribe

PostPosted: Thu May 03, 2007 11:41 pm
by Alex
Took this in a remote hill tribe willage in the Thailand's north.

Image

Alex

PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2007 12:06 am
by sirhc55
Pro’s

Beautiful location with a great view

Con’s

The corrugated iron roofs and telegraph poles take away from an idyllic scene

PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2007 1:39 am
by Steffen
Alex,
the image looks rather subdued, but maybe that's just what it takes to capture the actual mood and atmosphere up there.

Chris,
I like the Pro/Con commenting style. Maybe this could be adopted more widely, to encourage people to give honest critique rather than saying nothing (because they don't want to sound negative).

Cheers
Steffen.

PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2007 8:07 am
by the foto fanatic
Hi Alex
I would like to expand on Chris's comments.

I think this photo suffers because it is neither one thing nor the other.
If it is meant to show the stunning landscape, then the foreground is unnecessary.

On the other hand, if it is meant to show the living environment of the hill tribes, then all the sky is unnecessary, leaving the pic showing the foreground and present middle-ground, the hills.

On yet another hand (that makes three :lol: ), perhaps it is just a memory of somewhere that you have been and that you enjoyed. If so, hands 1 and 2 don't apply! :)

I hope this is taken as it is meant - constructive criticism designed to have you think about what message is important for you, the photographer to present to me, your audience.

PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2007 9:29 am
by Alex
Thanks for the comments, everyone. Chris - I like the format of your critique. It's helpful.

I think this shot serves more as a memory for me, as cricketfan mentioned. I guess I wanted to capture the subdued atmospheren of the village/ sort of half-dead environment.

Cheers
Alex