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walk on by

PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 3:20 pm
by NJ
i have been wanting to take this photo for a couple of weeks now, finally got the chance with no cars in the way. taken with the 50mm 1.8... 1/15sec @ f/5.6. what do you think?

selective colour:
Image

desaturated:
Image

EDIT: added desturated version due to macka's input :)

PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 3:28 pm
by Alpha_7
I really like this Nathan, it works well, very well. The selective colour I felt was subtle and very affective, the composition is well thought out and frames the shot very well. Also the choice of shutter speed to get the movement in the walker, all bring things together nicely. Well done.

PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 3:31 pm
by NJ
thanks craig! yeah i actually took the time to think it through. I walk down this alley way after uni every day to go to the station. So i was constantly thinking about ways to make a photo out of it.

PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 3:37 pm
by Alpha_7
NJ wrote:thanks craig! yeah i actually took the time to think it through. I walk down this alley way after uni every day to go to the station. So i was constantly thinking about ways to make a photo out of it.


Well it's definitely shows, you're photography keeps improving, so keep thinking and shooting.

PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 3:45 pm
by sirhc55
Pro’s

Great composition
Excellent colour balance
Well worth the wait

Con’s

None

PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 3:50 pm
by macka
sirhc55 wrote:Pro’s

...

Con’s

None


Is this your new thing, Chris? I like it. :D

Edit: should probably remember to comment on the image while I'm here (D'oh).

Compositionally I really like it. Not sold on the selective colour, though - I don't know, I could be wring but I just don't think it needs it. I think I would go with a desaturated look instead if it were my shot.

PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 4:12 pm
by sirhc55
Precludes using a superfluous amount of verbiage Kris :wink: :wink:

PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 4:13 pm
by Alex
Great photo, Nathan. Beautifully composed with framing provided!

Alex

PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 5:42 pm
by NJ
thanks very much everyone

macka, i took in your advice, and it looks great, i added it to the original. thanks :D

PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 6:58 pm
by Killakoala
I like both takes of the image. I do love a good example of contrast.

PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 7:53 pm
by BT*ist
Excellent shot - I think the selective desaturation works: it becomes a frame for the central image. The original isn't bad either, but my eyes weren't really sure where to focus. How long were you lying in wait to take it?

PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 8:50 pm
by stubbsy
Nathan

I've said it before, but I'll say it again - boy you're getting good. I prefer the desat (#2) to the selective colour.

PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 9:32 pm
by NJ
thanks guys :D! umm was a fair few weeks until i finally took my camera, then it was a matter of 5 minutes - waiting for someone to walk past (couldnt see them coming)

PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2007 12:28 am
by rooboy
Fantastic shot, & love the processing in the second :D

PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2007 10:21 am
by macka
Hey Nathan - de-sat version looks great to me. Excellent shot. :)

PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2007 5:00 pm
by Big V
I actually like the original shot because I find it forces me to view all of the scene, whilst the desat version focus me to the man too quickly. There is so much to see in this image, love the posters ang graffiti on the walls, which is what makes the whole scene so visually interesting. Good stuff.

PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2007 9:10 pm
by Alpha_7
I like the destat that has now been posted too! Well done!