Sydney Harbour at Dusk - Keeper?

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Sydney Harbour at Dusk - Keeper?

Postby dviv on Mon May 07, 2007 4:10 pm

I like it but not sure... 20sec exposure - IOS400 F/11

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Postby iGBH on Mon May 07, 2007 4:22 pm

It seems a little washed about but given the exposure i guess that is to be expected. I think the movement of the ferry in the bottom left hand corner is also a bit distracting. I would maybe PS that out.

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Postby BT*ist on Mon May 07, 2007 4:47 pm

I'd be tempted to bump up the contrast on the shot. That'll get the sky a little less brown and get the colours looking better.

It's a nice vantage point you took the shot from - where was it?
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Postby dviv on Mon May 07, 2007 4:51 pm

BT*ist wrote:I'd be tempted to bump up the contrast on the shot. That'll get the sky a little less brown and get the colours looking better.

It's a nice vantage point you took the shot from - where was it?


Thanks, I'll give it a try.

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Postby Frankenstein on Mon May 07, 2007 9:37 pm

Personally, I'd crop half the sky, and definitely play with levels or curves to up the contrast. It has the makings of a good shot, but needs a little work.

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Postby B01NG on Mon May 07, 2007 10:21 pm

its a nice shot, but i have to agree that it is a bit washed out, i would crop out the highway on the bottom right hand corner, a bit disctracting.
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Postby sheepie on Mon May 07, 2007 10:31 pm

Definitely a keeper - with some bumping of levels. About 30 seconds of Photoshop work should do the trick :)

I'd probably crop a tiny bit off the bottom, and about half the sky too :)
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Mon May 07, 2007 10:43 pm

Yeah as has been said, up the levels and you have a great shot!!
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Postby dviv on Mon May 07, 2007 11:31 pm

Thanks for all the advice guys!

Hows this?

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Bit more off the bottom?
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Mon May 07, 2007 11:38 pm

100% better......awesome!
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Postby Willy wombat on Mon May 07, 2007 11:48 pm

yes much better
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Postby devilla101 on Tue May 08, 2007 7:38 am

Yah, I agree! Definitely a keeper
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Postby B01NG on Wed May 09, 2007 11:06 am

sooo much better! deffinately a keeper! :D
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Postby dviv on Wed May 09, 2007 1:18 pm

Thanks all, your comments are much appreciated!
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Postby Matt. K on Wed May 09, 2007 6:37 pm

dviv
I prefer the original image. I like its softness....it is a more sensual photograph. Just goes to show that there is no figuring for personal taste! I think you should always go with your gut feeling because it's your creation and I think your first instinct was spot on.
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Postby dviv on Wed May 09, 2007 6:46 pm

Matt. K wrote:dviv
I prefer the original image. I like its softness....it is a more sensual photograph. Just goes to show that there is no figuring for personal taste! I think you should always go with your gut feeling because it's your creation and I think your first instinct was spot on.


Thanks Matt.

I have been playing around with it quite a lot and have still not got it to the point where I am 100% happy with it. Although I think that's more to do with my lack of Photoshop skill :o :lol:

I like them both - I agree with you about the softness, although the second is a lot more dramatic. I'll probably change my mind (again) tomorrow!

As you say, personal taste...
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