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Postby Oneputt on Tue May 08, 2007 4:42 pm

I haven't posted an image here in a long while so these are probably overdue. Looking for C&C.

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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue May 08, 2007 4:45 pm

Long time no see John, but WOW, these are some amazing shots. I particularly like #3 and #2, but they are all good. These have a... I'm not sure X-Ray / Sci-fi feel to them something a little different from the usual smoke pics.. I think because these are low key and usually they are posted as high key images ?
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue May 08, 2007 4:47 pm

Pro’s

The first three shots are amazing - well executed and mesmerising

Con’s

The fourth shot does not hold up to the first three

EDIT: Thanks Macka :wink:
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue May 08, 2007 4:48 pm

 BTW John, please post some information on the setup and or post processing you used, I'd love to know! Thanks!
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Postby Glen on Tue May 08, 2007 5:07 pm

Very impressive John. I agree with Chris
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Postby BT*ist on Tue May 08, 2007 5:15 pm

Did you say 'smoke' or 'wrought iron'? These look amazingly solid. I too would love to know how these were done, practically and (I'm guessing) in photoshop afterwards!

The fourth isn't bad - but it doesn't in fit with the style/tone of the prior three.
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Postby PiroStitch on Tue May 08, 2007 5:15 pm

this is really cool. reminds me of spiderman :)
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Postby Oneputt on Tue May 08, 2007 5:26 pm

Craig the setup was quite simple. An absolutely draft free room (towels stuffed under the doors etc), a black background with a single plume of smoke (insense) about a metre in front of it. A single large white reflector on one side and three flashes on the other (I discovered that I needed heaps of light). I then used a Giotto Air Rocket to agitate the smoke in a fairly controlled manner.

PP was limited to sharpening and a backed off solarization filter.
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Postby tbgphoto on Tue May 08, 2007 5:30 pm

Such a simple setup but spectaculr results.
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Postby NJ on Tue May 08, 2007 6:47 pm

looks like chrome... or silk! absolutely stunning shots. very well done. thanks for sharing your set up too :)
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Postby macka on Tue May 08, 2007 7:21 pm

Lovely abstracts. I agree with NJ, almost looks like silk. The first one is the best IMO.

Did you use the same sharpening settings in all of them? #3 looks a little overdone compared to the others for some reason.


sirhc55 wrote:Con’s
The first three shots are amazing - well executed and mesmerising


If these are the Con's, the Pro's must be pretty good. :wink:
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Postby Oneputt on Tue May 08, 2007 7:53 pm

The same settings on them all Macka. I very rarely alter my normal settings (cos I forget to reset them :wink: ).
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Postby Slider on Tue May 08, 2007 8:16 pm

Simply AWESOME :D
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Postby binky on Tue May 08, 2007 10:21 pm

Absolutely fascinating .. if you had not said it was smoke I would not have guessed it .. If you got it printed and put on a wall for viewing I'm sure you'll have lots of people guessing what it was.
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Postby Man Tripod on Wed May 09, 2007 11:15 am

All stunning. Brilliant idea and sensational execution!
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Postby marcotrov on Wed May 09, 2007 8:13 pm

#1,2 and 3 are absolutely terrific John and certainly in the fine art category.
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Postby Oneputt on Wed May 09, 2007 8:24 pm

Thanks Marco and thanks everyone else for such nice comments. :D
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