Home studio portrait
Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 12:59 amDid some more experimenting with a single light source (SB800).
Would love to get some C&C on this one.
Thanks
Would love to get some C&C on this one.
Thanks
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 12:59 amBeautiful
Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 12:34 pmFor what I can see, it is a very beautiful picture that needs no improvement. I like it as it is.
Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 1:14 pmMuch, much better, the light is still a little bit harsh right at the top of the cheek and it could do with just a little more fill on the right hand side, but you are definately on the right track
Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 8:31 pmThank you for the comments, guys.
Cheers
Alex
Cheers
Alex
Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 9:58 pmColour and sharpness are very pleasing to the eye. This is well shot
congrats
jethro
congrats
jethro
Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 10:58 amPosted: Sat May 19, 2007 11:26 amPro’s
Beautiful lighting
Very nice DOF
Two points about Asian ladies - beautifully smooth skin and full lips - full of character
Con’s
These are personal comments only:
The lady is shown with bare skin so I find the head gear does not compliment her features
The shadow of the earing could be cloned out
The unkempt hair on the right viewing shoulder is distracting
Overall a very nice portrait
Beautiful lighting
Very nice DOF
Two points about Asian ladies - beautifully smooth skin and full lips - full of character
Con’s
These are personal comments only:
The lady is shown with bare skin so I find the head gear does not compliment her features
The shadow of the earing could be cloned out
The unkempt hair on the right viewing shoulder is distracting
Overall a very nice portrait
Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 3:51 pmThanks Marco and Chris.
Chris - thanks a lot for the detailed input. This is really helpful, once again!
The point about the shadow from the earring is a very good one and now that you mentioned I do find it destractive to the eye. The same goes for the unkempt hair on the right.
What I also find a bit of a con for this photo is that the composition feels somewhat squashed as perhaps more space on either side would give it a better feel.
It is amazing how much you can learn from a simple home set-up such as this one, especially about the lighting and the little things that get overlooked, e.g. unkempt hair.
Cheers
Alex
Chris - thanks a lot for the detailed input. This is really helpful, once again!
The point about the shadow from the earring is a very good one and now that you mentioned I do find it destractive to the eye. The same goes for the unkempt hair on the right.
What I also find a bit of a con for this photo is that the composition feels somewhat squashed as perhaps more space on either side would give it a better feel.
It is amazing how much you can learn from a simple home set-up such as this one, especially about the lighting and the little things that get overlooked, e.g. unkempt hair.
Cheers
Alex