I suck at processing, but i tried to put some effort into this one. Id love some feedback.
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I suck at processing, but i tried to put some effort into this one. Id love some feedback.
Welcome Chemicalhorizon - good on you for posting your first image. I hope there are plenty more.
WRT your shot. I see you are trying to create a moody lighting for this image. Its a good idea. However - I find the tool tray blocking light from the top right of the window to be a little distracting. I would prefer to see a clear path between the chair and the window, by lining it up a little more to the left. Steve (Nikon D200/D700)
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I like the detail captured in the dark part, but I think the ominous air that it creates might be countered by the coloured window, which looks a bit too 'cheerful' - or at any rate very prominent. A black'n'white treatment might work better? ps> welcome!
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Thanks for the replies.
I couldnt actually move any further left  There was a barrier. Photo was taken in a museum.
I never thought to try a BnW treatment. Im gonna give it a go
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