My First 'serious' fashion shoot images - Final!

[Cre8tivepixels]

Last ones thanks for all those who had a squiz.......to gain some of the comments from some of you guys who's work i adore makes me feel really great!



Straight outa cam bar Saturation increase.......






Cheers
Dan

[fishafotos]

Loving them all!

The only thing that i would nitpick at is the shadow in the 2nd one. I like the shadow but I don't like how it is cut off by sunlight down the bottom. I don't know if that can be fixed with some pp or not.

Did you add the reflections in the last one? If not, you have a very clean floor and oven!

Harry

[wendellt]

i like the tone and the backdrop of the first one
everything seems to compliment each other

just as a simple observation Lauren doesnt look so comfortable
the guitar shot needs more funk it seems like shes just doing it for the sake of doing it, so i guess this is an issue with establishing rapport with the model

also on the last 2 watch her expression

but they show your usual flair angles and all, so very good work
and im sure it was fun shes a great model

[Slider]

Great stuff Dan. Good lighting and creative composition. Nice

[PiroStitch]

The first shot is great. Watch out for the background and whether or not the subject stands out from the background. If it doesn't, you can remedy this by getting them to take a step or two towards you or widening the aperture or just stick a backlight in. Otherwise nice work.