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A Couple of Headshots!

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Sun May 27, 2007 12:33 pm

Thanks for checking these out.......great models make my job just so damn easy :)

Tonal adjustment....basically straight outa cam......
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Ditto above........
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I know my airbrushing has to get better....any tips out there?

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Postby phillipb on Sun May 27, 2007 12:37 pm

These are good Dan, I would be inclined to reduce the reflections on the glasses in the second shot. I tend to concentrate on the glasses rather then the girl's face, unless that was your intention.
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Sun May 27, 2007 12:41 pm

phillipb wrote:These are good Dan, I would be inclined to reduce the reflections on the glasses in the second shot. I tend to concentrate on the glasses rather then the girl's face, unless that was your intention.


Hey mate, thanks for the comments....yeah look a while ago i was reading some work on Anton Corbin (famous rock photographer - u2's main tog) and he always said that a sign of a great studio image "not saying that mine are great either" was that you could see your light source (softbox/flash) in either a rock stars glasses (as many wear them in photo shoots) or their pupils....so yeah, just another take on photography i guess.....

The reflection i think works really well in the first one... :D

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Postby Willy wombat on Sun May 27, 2007 11:53 pm

I noticed the reflection in the first one Dan. Its well done how you han see her legs, etc in the glasses. Was that a fluke, or you a master of geometry?
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