Egyptian Honey Balm

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Egyptian Honey Balm

Postby wendellt on Sat Jun 02, 2007 10:35 pm

yup

egyptian honey balm applied to models skin at the Friedrich Gray show
gave them an ultra edgy feel, photographically interesting highlights and shine

shot with 85mm

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Re: Egyptian Honey Balm

Postby W00DY on Sat Jun 02, 2007 10:56 pm

wendellt wrote:
shot with 85mm



Almost as good as my 85mm kid shots :wink:

Interesting look, I love the third one, the texture of the leather (?) hood against her face is awesome.

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Postby jethro on Sat Jun 02, 2007 11:04 pm

Wendell, I dont like these as much as the last lot you shot. Them don't seem as good in quality as we have come to accept from you. You seemed to have rushed these. Focus is shit and comp is not to your usual standard. Sorry for the bagging but its not Wendell standard.

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Postby sirhc55 on Sat Jun 02, 2007 11:14 pm

Sorry Wendell but I have to agree with Jethro - these are not to your usual style or quality :cry:
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Postby Pehpsi on Sun Jun 03, 2007 3:20 pm

I never shoot people, or photograph them :) but i think 2 & 3 are great, but 2 being the best because of the lighting and it looks the sharpest..
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Postby Manta on Sun Jun 03, 2007 4:32 pm

Okay.. I'll agree these aren't what I normally expect from the fashion portrait guru BUT... I still like them for the pure fact that they are a bit different. I keep coming back to that third one - to me, it's a beautiful image and the selective focus on her eye really makes the shot.

Maybe those Egyptians were on to something. :wink:
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Postby Heath Bennett on Sun Jun 03, 2007 6:19 pm

I reckon these are great.

Focus and softness don't matter to me, mood does. Sharpness gets too much publicity, it hires a really great PR agency.

Depends if it is the technical side of photography or the artistic side that appeals to you.
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Postby wendellt on Sun Jun 03, 2007 6:36 pm

hi thanks guys

all comments well taken and understood

for this series it doesnt show the fashion but it's just a snippet preview of the backstage mood at that show, atmospheric brooding yet fragile
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