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Static & Cliché

PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 4:10 pm
by Pehpsi
Ahoy. Well i never really show people my non-sporty outdoor attempts, so i thought i'd ask for some honest feedback on a few from Brighton some months ago :) Cheers.




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PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 4:53 pm
by Manta
I like them James. The treatment works well in the first one; composition not so well in the second but the colours, although strong, look good, as they do in the third.

I'd be tempted to colourise the last shot - it's pretty bland as it is - and crop the lefthand side where the different sand layer is distracting.

JMHO.
:)

PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 5:23 pm
by Pehpsi
Thanks for the insight, Manta, i will have a play with the last and see what i think :)

PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 6:01 pm
by Matt. K
James
You are using the light! And light is everything in photography. Well done!

PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 6:51 pm
by Pehpsi
Thanks, Matt :) I still haven't got the plumbs to get up at sunrise though, and i'm not gona start in winter :)