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Postby Yi-P on Tue Jun 05, 2007 12:32 am

I failed to submit my photos to the challenge, so here they are.

Please C&C on them, want to know how I did in these ones.


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Postby Pehpsi on Tue Jun 05, 2007 3:33 am

Love the comp in the first one, and the DOF control in the third (which i can't do, i think). Look great in b&w too, which i have a hard time getting right.

Why didn't you submit them??
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Postby Reschsmooth on Tue Jun 05, 2007 5:56 am

Yip, great stuff, and I can kind of be thankful you didn't enter. :lol: :lol:
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Postby Yi-P on Tue Jun 05, 2007 12:24 pm

Pehpsi wrote:Why didn't you submit them??


It happen that I submitted the component images but not the last one, how stupid I am... :oops: :oops:


Reschsmooth wrote:Yip, great stuff, and I can kind of be thankful you didn't enter. :lol: :lol:


You evil bugger... :twisted: :evil: :evil:
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Postby Pehpsi on Tue Jun 05, 2007 12:30 pm

Ahh, i see :oops:
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:06 pm

Yip - excellent images but the final product (the triptych) does not conform to what is a typical triptych.

A triptych is a series of three panels, normally joined together, whereby the central image is larger than the two side panels. All three images form a continuous story board with the larger central panel containing the main subject and the two side panels are contiguous to the main image.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:21 pm

sirhc55 wrote:Yip - excellent images but the final product (the triptych) does not conform to what is a typical triptych.

A triptych is a series of three panels, normally joined together, whereby the central image is larger than the two side panels. All three images form a continuous story board with the larger central panel containing the main subject and the two side panels are contiguous to the main image.


Chris I thought we weren't meant to discuss our opinions on what made a triptych until after the challenge had closed so we don't influence the voting (unless voting has indeed closed ?)
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Postby Yi-P on Wed Jun 06, 2007 12:14 am

sirhc55 wrote:Yip - excellent images but the final product (the triptych) does not conform to what is a typical triptych.

A triptych is a series of three panels, normally joined together, whereby the central image is larger than the two side panels. All three images form a continuous story board with the larger central panel containing the main subject and the two side panels are contiguous to the main image.


Thanks Chris, points taken :D
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