Fashion Students pt. 2

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Fashion Students pt. 2

Postby Alex on Sun Jun 17, 2007 12:18 am

A few more from the final year student presentations.


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http://www.alexgitlits.com/forum/DSC_0293_1.jpg


Thanks for looking, any C&C welcomed.

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Postby Killakoala on Sun Jun 17, 2007 10:40 am

Both parts have been good. I take it the students are modelling their own garments?
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Postby Alex on Sun Jun 17, 2007 12:31 pm

Killakoala wrote:Both parts have been good. I take it the students are modelling their own garments?


Thanks, Steve,

The students were actually modelling for each other (but not their own garments). Some brought their own models though.

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Postby jamesw on Sun Jun 17, 2007 1:50 pm

i thought the flash on the wall was a little hot in the 3rd and fourth shot.

could have helped getting those flashes off camera.
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Postby Alex on Sun Jun 17, 2007 1:53 pm

Thanks James,

Flash in all the photos was off-camera. Single flash though.

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Postby wendellt on Sun Jun 17, 2007 1:59 pm

i like how you scoped out backsgrounds that suit the garments

apart from the issues of students modelling their own creations

there is a nice juxtaposition with the grey cold bare concrete against the warmth of the garments

and i like the pink backdrop too
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Postby jamesw on Sun Jun 17, 2007 3:49 pm

Alex wrote:Thanks James,

Flash in all the photos was off-camera. Single flash though.

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do you mind me asking where it was positioned?

it looks like you got the lighitng really, really good on the models, just that foreground light really distracts me. i'm pretty picky about that stuff, though, so perhaps otehr people may not be as put off by it.

i probably would have composed the image a little differently so that you would not have to worry about the hot light... the first two shots look mint
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Postby Alex on Sun Jun 17, 2007 3:55 pm

jamesw wrote:
Alex wrote:Thanks James,

Flash in all the photos was off-camera. Single flash though.

Alex


do you mind me asking where it was positioned?

it looks like you got the lighitng really, really good on the models, just that foreground light really distracts me. i'm pretty picky about that stuff, though, so perhaps otehr people may not be as put off by it.

i probably would have composed the image a little differently so that you would not have to worry about the hot light... the first two shots look mint


Hey James,

It was positioned almost parallel to the wall, probably at 10 or less degree angle to it. TTL mode EV -1.


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Postby Alex on Sun Jun 17, 2007 3:57 pm

wendellt wrote:i like how you scoped out backsgrounds that suit the garments

apart from the issues of students modelling their own creations

there is a nice juxtaposition with the grey cold bare concrete against the warmth of the garments

and i like the pink backdrop too


Thanks Wendell,

There was one pro model, but I forget her name. I've seen her photos in mags and papers. Here is her pic at the uni event.

http://www.alexgitlits.com/gallery/RMIT/Day1_2/DSC_0332.jpg

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