Lorikeets in the orchard

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Lorikeets in the orchard

Postby Underload on Mon Jun 25, 2007 11:54 pm

Given that it's citrus season, the lorikeets are out and about in the small orchard at home, giving the mandarins a real hiding. As annoying (and noisy!) as they can be - they do present themselves for the camera, every now and again.

I'm pretty happy with these, but not sure what caused the funky ghosting in the leaves. C & C welcome...I'm thinking their heads might be oversharpened?

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Postby Geoff on Tue Jun 26, 2007 12:02 am

Nice work! They don't look too sharp on my LCD monitor. The siggy 70-200 shows its value again in the right hands, these are great shots.
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Postby Pehpsi on Tue Jun 26, 2007 12:04 am

Awesome shots mate. #1 is my fave. The colour and clarity is great..
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Jun 26, 2007 12:05 am

I see no ghosting - what I do see is reflective light and OOF leaves - lovely pics BTW :)
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Postby ATJ on Tue Jun 26, 2007 12:20 am

Both excellent photos.

I think I see what you mean about the sharpening. The blue feathers on the head look a little whiter than they probably should - but it doesn't look like over sharpening (if you know what I mean).
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Postby Bluebell on Tue Jun 26, 2007 7:23 am

They look fantastic on my monitor too. That first has a mean look in his eye!
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Postby Old Bob on Tue Jun 26, 2007 8:27 am

They look great on my old monitor as well. Good shooting.

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Postby crackatoea on Wed Jun 27, 2007 4:51 pm

I really like these. The detail in the heads are fantastic. Nice and sharp but not overdone.
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Postby Killakoala on Wed Jun 27, 2007 5:29 pm

That's a beautiful burst of colour in the first image. Nice and sharp too which really accentuates the bird from the foreground.
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Postby Underload on Wed Jun 27, 2007 9:02 pm

Thanks very much for all the comments. I'm starting to really enjoy photography now, but so much left to learn :shock:

The weather over the last few days has been a bit rough, so hopefully they might be back tomorrow, and I can stalk them round the trees again.

If I got too close, they'd fly away, to a set of gum trees not far off. You'd look up and see a heap of these colourful figures screeching away, waiting for me to leave! :)
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