1. If the angled girder were framing the lines of the cars profile rather than intersecting it I would like this better, other than that I like the angle it is shot from, the conversion and the exposure levels
2. I'd simply like to have a gap between the top of the windscreen and the bottom of the support beam, as they are both darkish they blend a little. Same as above other than that. Even the location of the pole on the front works as the line is at the edge of the tyre, but there is a separation.
3. There needs to be something lighting from the A-pillar to the edge of the front door. Other than that I actually like the symmetry of the lines leading to the front and rear tyres, the poles, and the one way sign pointing in the opposite direction! Perhaps if you cropped it down to the second horizontal girder back from the far wall...
Cheers
Brett
Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 12:45 am
