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Postby byrt_001 on Mon Jul 02, 2007 12:58 pm

Hi everyone

I was working during the weekend to do some overall shots of the events of the evening.

C&C welcome

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Postby Killakoala on Mon Jul 02, 2007 1:38 pm

That looks great. I like the photo too.
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Postby Geoff on Mon Jul 02, 2007 1:56 pm

Yum!
I think that the lemon is a little too dominant in the image, but that's just MO.
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Postby Yi-P on Mon Jul 02, 2007 2:36 pm

You make me hungry, even just after lunch :lol:
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Postby Grev on Tue Jul 03, 2007 9:48 am

Unspectacular title for a spectacular image.
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Postby Sandy Feet on Tue Jul 03, 2007 7:50 pm

Fantastic Image, would love to know the shooting/lighting details

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Postby Underload on Tue Jul 03, 2007 7:54 pm

I don't like prawns, but a photo like that almost makes me want to try one :)
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Jul 03, 2007 8:00 pm

Excellent use of both controlled DOF and colours to offset the mouth watering image.
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Postby byrt_001 on Wed Jul 04, 2007 2:13 am

Hi everyone

thanks for your comments,

Geoff: I have to agree with the lemon, unfortunately i was having only a few seconds to shoot a few frames of a few dishes. The waiter hold the plate before he took it to the customer.:shock: :D

Rod: the nikon d2xs on manual, and sb800 off camera. The photo has the exif data. The flash was an angle almost 12 o'clock on top. So I was holding the flash with my left hand and the camera with my right.

I posted some more photos of that evening on my website>> http://www.6701.sunpixs.com

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Postby fishafotos on Thu Jul 05, 2007 1:41 am

I really like the shot but I definitely find the lemon too dominant, I think a brighter sky would have worked nicely too, but that is just nitpicking. The shot is great!

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Postby ozimax on Thu Jul 05, 2007 11:58 am

Very nice, very different.
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