Looking out the office window again.....................

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Looking out the office window again.....................

Postby SteveGriffin on Sun Jul 15, 2007 9:12 pm

These are a couple that I nabbed at work this morning.

C&C Please especially if you can comment on how I could have framed them better or any post processing suggestions

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Postby Steffen on Mon Jul 16, 2007 2:12 am

Jee, where do you work, centre point tower...? ;)

Those shots are very sharp and detailed, and you caught some really good light. I like!

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Postby who on Mon Jul 16, 2007 2:18 am

Nice pictures.....

Obviously from the air, taken of my home town - Brissy.....

First pic is from above the Valley? looking south..... and is my favorite.

#2 seems disjointed to me with its narrow focus on those buildings at the bottom.....

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Postby Bluebell on Mon Jul 16, 2007 6:05 pm

The first is fabulous, I haven't seen a post card that looked this good. Where is it shot from? The third image doesn't open for me either.
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Postby big pix on Mon Jul 16, 2007 6:12 pm

The window glass needs cleaning :lol:....... great capture :lol: :lol:
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Postby glamy on Mon Jul 16, 2007 6:17 pm

I'd love to work in this office! I like the first one.
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Postby radar on Mon Jul 16, 2007 6:17 pm

This is Steve's office:
http://www.indiana.smugmug.com/gallery/ ... 9/88539878

Steve, not sure how to improve the first one, I like it as is.

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Postby SteveGriffin on Mon Jul 16, 2007 10:04 pm

Thanks for the comments.

This winter has been bizarre as far as the weather goes. Lots of very strong westerly winds which has meant no flying on 2 out of 3 days but when it has been flyable the visibility has been absolutely spectacular. The last 2 mornings we have been able to see Double Island Point from Brisbane - a distance of over 200 km. Until yesterday I hadn't seen visibility like that in 20+ years of flying balloons around Brisbane.
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Postby macka on Wed Jul 18, 2007 4:26 pm

For a moment I thought you must work in a really tall building. Pretty cool job you've got flying balloons. :)
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Postby Raskill on Wed Jul 18, 2007 4:43 pm

macka wrote:For a moment I thought you must work in a really tall building.


I'd love to say I wasn't this silly.... But I thought exactly the same thing. :oops:

Great pics Steve. Is that the Glasshouse Mountains in the distance? If so, it sure must have been a clear day! :shock:
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Postby SteveGriffin on Wed Jul 18, 2007 4:47 pm

Very tall building - about 1500 feet with a transparent section between floors 3 and 99 :lol:

The mountains in the distance are to the south, Barney, Lindsay and Flinders Peak.

As for the job.... it beats working :wink:
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