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My attempt at PJ

Posted:
Tue Jul 17, 2007 11:49 pm
by sirhc55
A friend of mine, Lin, being interviewed after the Golden Tree she had designed was ”planted” in China Town.
C&C welcome


Posted:
Tue Jul 17, 2007 11:55 pm
by ATJ
Chris,
I like it for its comment on photojournalism itself. It seems less about your friend Lin and more about the people interviewing her. I guess that's what you were intending.

Posted:
Wed Jul 18, 2007 11:25 am
by Glen
I agree with Andrew, which makes it such a strong image for a brochure or press release. I would imagine she is very pleased with this.
My only little comment is her face seems a little soft compared to other sections of the image

Posted:
Wed Jul 18, 2007 11:29 am
by sirhc55
Glen wrote:I agree with Andrew, which makes it such a strong image for a brochure or press release. I would imagine she is very pleased with this.
My only little comment is her face seems a little soft compared to other sections of the image
You are spot on re softness Glen. What I was trying to achieve was a lead-in to her face with the boom mic being sharper


Posted:
Wed Jul 18, 2007 11:37 am
by Glen
It worked well Chris, that was how my eyes read the photo when I first looked at it