Does this work ?

i have never done a self portrait before. i was feeling f'ing exhausted tonight. mother and baby have a cold, long, long days followed by long nights. i wanted to communicate that emotion of weariness. (but of course at the same time producing an effective photograph with good balanced lighting.).
sb600 bounced off kitchen cupboard to my right. sb800 bounced off ceiling to my left. used the 70-200VR to fill the frame.
honest comments appreciated on lighting, composition and whether this carried what i wanted. grazi !
<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/10435080@N00/863597985/" title="Photo Sharing"><img src="http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1400/863597985_f2f8586c2a_o.jpg" width="800" height="658" alt="Leave me be" /></a>
sb600 bounced off kitchen cupboard to my right. sb800 bounced off ceiling to my left. used the 70-200VR to fill the frame.
honest comments appreciated on lighting, composition and whether this carried what i wanted. grazi !

<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/10435080@N00/863597985/" title="Photo Sharing"><img src="http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1400/863597985_f2f8586c2a_o.jpg" width="800" height="658" alt="Leave me be" /></a>