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Postby wendellt on Tue Aug 07, 2007 2:49 am

Did a test shoot for a new model

it was her first time but i think she did well under my direction

I briefed all involved that the shoot theme should play around with fragility and nostalgia, not sure if it translated through

Shot all available light in the glorious afternoon sun, light bounce from nearby red perspex added that extra lighting dynamic and mood

when testing with new models it's important to show range and later i'll show you this girl can 'transform' looks therefore i classify her as a good model

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Model: Sophie@Chadwicks(New Faces)
Stylist: Angela Wozniak@Scene
Hair & Makeup: Ayshe Ismail@Cameron Jane
Assisted: Fab Cortesi
Location: Cameron Jane Studio, Surry Hills
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Postby Glen on Tue Aug 07, 2007 2:54 am

Nice work Wendell. For me her skin seems a little oversharpened in 2 & 3
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Postby Onyx on Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:20 am

Good stuff Wendell. I esp like #3 as it's sorta usual for the model to be facing away from the window, with the backlight hitting her hair, and yet the face is exposed nicely. Prominent dark eyebrows makes her look like an emo bitch tho - but that's nothing to do with the photography side of things.
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Postby Alex on Tue Aug 07, 2007 9:00 am

2nd and last are my picks. Mood conveyed beautifully! Well done!

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