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Widescreen crop: NGV

PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 10:24 am
by PiroStitch
Just outside the Guggenheim Exhibition in Melbourne.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 10:44 am
by Alpha_7
First two work for me very well, the first doesn't work for me as part of this series and is overall compositionally weaker to my eyes.

PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 3:50 am
by seeto.centric
gotta love the desaturation treatment :)
excellent stuff!

-j

PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:59 am
by ATJ
My only problem is what looks like jpeg artifacts on the red signs. This is especially noticeable around the words.

PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 12:53 pm
by Bindii
I really like your work PiroStitch and look forward to viewing your posts as this kind of togging is what I seem to be drawn to...

the second one is by far the stronger image of the three and appeals to me a lot.. I would be almost tempted to add some more saturation to the signs.. and maybe a slight vignette around the outer edges with the lighter part being on the woman... but thats just me and it might not work for you...:)