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This was intentional, critiques?:


This one was fairly arty in my direction and Bel became more relaxed, hopefully this is evident:

#1 - No, no, no, no

#2 - great pose and look from Bel.

In both pics the focus seems to be forward of Bel’s face and hence, soft

See I'm the opposite.. I like the first one.. although I can think of a few things to try next time to improve it.. like have her fingers pointing straight up rather than at an angle.... and have her hand centred in the shot also.. and get her forwards from the wall to eliminate shadow...

can't help ya with the second though.. cause I am not so keen on that one as I think it accentuates the bags under her eyes...which judging by the first shot she doesnt have....

Great look in the first one. Hands are distracting and otherwise take away from a a beautiful shot.

Peter Mc