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Brissy Sunrise

PostPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 12:48 pm
by SteveGriffin
It was too calm to fly yesterday so I tried to capture the sunrise.

C&C Please. Particularly in relation to the cropping

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 1:14 pm
by Manta
For me, the third is the winner here Steve.

The first is almost there but seems a little cramped horizontally. The second is crying out for more foreground; just a tad lower. The problem with that Kangaroo Point vantage spot is that great chunk of black nothingness where the Gardens and mangroves are. Perhaps two versions blended - one with the Gardens area brightened up a bit so it doesn't appear so bland but still adds more room at the bottom of the shot? Hope this makes sense.

PostPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 1:17 pm
by Big Red
totally agree with Simons view as that was my exact thoughts as i scrolled the pics down.

PostPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 1:44 pm
by Bindii
Yep me three.... third one...

I really like the metallic effect of the water Steve... very nice! :)

PostPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 3:08 pm
by SteveGriffin
I have unsqueezed the 2nd one a bit. The first is essentially uncropped so I can't do much with it except file it in the round.

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Thanks for the comments

PostPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 3:14 pm
by Louie
Looks much better 'unsqueezed' in both senses (ie not wedged between the other two photos anymore, as well as crop change :wink: )

I really like the third one too, but maybe with a tad less sky at the top? My humble unlearned opinion.


Cheers,
Elena